PHOT 50A: History of Photography Before 1946
Stage 4
Erika Gentry

Basic Information

Number of Outcomes8
Number of Outcomes Assessed2
Assessment FrequencyEvery year
Analysis FrequencyEvery year
Detail LinkLink

Course Information

Number of Course Sections1
Number of Instructors1

Improvement Details

DetailsThis semester, I added an MLA exercise and required library workshop on the topic by librarian Kate Connell the first week of the semester to try and improve this. I also re-wrote the course outline and updated the recommended course pre-requisites. I furnished an examples of an “A” paper using proper citations. I also developed a course blog with Instructor approved resources. http://photo50a.wordpress.com/

Assessment Methods

MethodsPrimary Method of Assessment:

25 Students each produced a paper comparing two historical that were reviewed

on the following ruberics and rankings.

Instructions:

Write a 3 to 4 double-spaced (1000 words) typewritten page paper

comparing and contrasting two specific photographs and photographers

that you admire and that have some acknowledged historical significance.

Examine each photograph carefully and make specific comments

regarding each photographer’s technique, composition, and vision. Make

sure to name the photographer and title of both photographs. The

questions listed above for the Think Piece paper could be a good place to

start when looking at the images you’ve chosen to write about. Also refer

to the Szarkowski article topics for discussion. Discuss what you think

may have been the maker’s intention; or how the photograph has inspired

you personally. Additionally, comment on how the two photographs are

similar to or different from one another. Any two images from the 19th,

20th centuries pre-1945 are fair game. Include MLA style citations and copies

of the images stapled to your paper. See course website for examples and

help. Visit the CCSF Library and take a workshop on successful writing and

using MLA citations.

In the text of your paper:

The first gambling Web site appeared in 1995, and online gambling

has since become the most lucrative Internet business (Will 92).

or,

George Will reported that in 2002 Internet gambling surpassed

pornography to become the Internet's most lucrative business (92).

In your Works Cited list:

Will, George F. "Electronic Morphine." Newsweek 25 Nov. 2002: 92.

Assessment Data Discussion and Analysis

TermFall 2013
How and With Whomfaculty and staff in other programs (History); staff in same program
Number Assessed25
Data SummaryRuberic1: Correct MLA style citations and

copies of the images stapled to the

paper. 2(poor) 9(fair) 10(good) 4(excellent)

Ruberic 2: 3 to 4 double-spaced typewritten page paper comparing and contrasting two specific photographs

2(poor) 11(fair) 8(good) 4(excellent)

Ruberic 3: Refered to the Szarkowski

article/think piece topics for

discussion. 2(poor) 16(fair) 5(good) 2(excellent)

Ruberic 5: Discuss what you think may have been the maker’s intention; or how the photograph has inspired you personally and comment on how the two photographs are similar to or different from one another. 0 (poor) 2(fair) 8(good) 15(excellent)

Ruberic 6: Clarity of expression,

grammar, spelling etc.

2(poor) 5(fair) 10(good) 8(excellent)

Conclusion

Based on the results, students are not entering into the course fully understanding how to properly implement MLA inline and end of paper citations. Additionally, several students struggle with college level writing skills. This semester, I added an MLA exercise and required library workshop on the topic by librarian Kate Connell the first week of the semester to try and improve this. I also re-wrote the course outline and updated the recommended course pre-requisites. I furnished an examples of an “A” paper using proper citations. I also developed a course blog with Instructor approved resources. Given all this – students still did not fully follow instruction or understand the MLA citation format fully.
Planned ImprovementsIn Fall 2014 I think it’s logical to perform the same assessment method in the next class to see if adjusting proposed teaching strategies improves the portfolio sequencing deficiency. In addition to the writing exercise – I may give an exam at the beginning of the semester on the topic of proper MLA citation. Given that this is a History course and not an English course – I will also re-emphasize the course pre-requisites. In additon in Fall 2013 the course outline was re-written so the outcomes were updated.
Program Review LinkYes, the above future improvements require resources that will be requested during the next annual PROGRAM REVIEW cycle. Examples: additional staff, equipment, software, consulting services, etc.

Future Plans

TermFall 2014
ActivitiesRewrite coruse outline
DetailsThe course outline will be submitted as rewritten in Fall 2013 to reflect current curricula sequencing.
HighlightsNo answer

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